those are two essays for the UIUC undergraduate application. Maybe you could help me with it.
Please let me know whether I go off the topic.
What part should I emphasize?
I m very happy when I find that someone had give advice on my first writing.
Chen Guo on Apr 18, 2010
I HOPE SOME OF YOU COULD REVISE IT FOR ME.I NEED PRCTICE ENGLISH WRITING.I'M A foreigner。
Chen Guo on Apr 14, 2010
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